Emma Lindley
3/30/2020 02:10:32 pm
I love the issue you are presenting in your play pages and I think there is a lot to work with regarding the subject. I think your first page with the "No Means No" was really successful. I do not know if you used glue, candle wax or something else but the texture is really amazing. It has a rough texture that I think complements the text well. Some of my favorite play pages of yours have been the text-based pages and I think you should continue with this idea. Maybe you could layer text with other images, working in a collage. You could also, along with collage, take words and content out magazine or newspapers and use them in your pages. Overall, great job and I can't wait to see more pages over corona school!
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Anna Yao
4/2/2020 07:58:28 am
I really like the diversity in materials you used, especially the water that you used to write words with. I also really love the fact that each of your pieces has an actual message underneath for the viewer to see. A suggestion for the future is to also make use of different surfaces to work on, instead of just the materials.
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Savannah
4/2/2020 09:36:39 am
I like your subject and I think you do a really good job portraying the different issues and ideas. In these three pieces, especially the first and last pieces, I love the texture of the different materials you used. My favorite is the third piece, it has a very interesting mark. One suggestion is that you could make some pieces that are more sculptural and move away some from just having the art relatively flat on a piece of paper. Overall, good job!
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Hanna NgaiHi, I'm a senior at Maggie Walker in Art 5 and I'm an installation sculpture artist that turns plastic bags into art. Archives
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